Tuesday, May 26, 2015

Wilson

And criticizing hunger between both sides while critics enjoy the current state of society conservationist crave change and better laws in favor of the environment. Wilson classically expresses the utter hatred between the two extremist and their mental stubbornness of compromise. Through the different point of views  Wilson uses certain writing styles to capture and inform the reader of the problem at hand.
"The people first critic stereotypes the environmentalist" is started off by titling conservationist as "enviros" or "environmental wackos". Wilson then uses wackos to refer to the environmentalist. This gives a negative, almost insulting tone, against that environs starting off the passage sharply. The readers develop a unintentional anti-hysteria towards the environmentalist. Wilson uses diction throughout his writing creating constant negative tones against the environmental wackos in attempts of creating a judgment in favor but the critics to the reader. In "The environmentalist stereotypes the people first critics" The environmentalist attempt the same strategy of the critics. To start the passage sharply by calling the critics hypocrites that are not apeasable people. Environmentalist show the contradictions of the critics and their greedy ways. Wilson uses environmentalists good actions in favor of winning the readers liking. He also recovers the critics history of corruption and social ties with big businesses.
On both sides exaggerations are taken way out of proportion to create either hypocritical or mentally unstable view of the opponent. In favor of the critics Wilson uses "real world possibilities" to explain why he reference to environmentalist as wackos. "some Bennington College student with a summer job will find an endangered red spider on your property and before you know what happened that endangered species act will be used to shut you down." Wilson shows the inconveniences of the environmentalist goals and it's disfavor of society. By writing that the person to find the spider is a student from Bennington university gives reality to this hyperbole making it more believable.

favorote peice of work in portfolio

My favorite piece of work in my profile you will have to be my nuclear power I chose this essay really hard on it and put a lot of effort into writing it. I planned to work hard enough for a rewarding grade however, despite my goal for success I was not able to provide the grade I needed because of I failed to write the sources correctly. This essay had the potential to score highly but because if a small mistake it didn't. This reflects a bigger lesson to me, in life it's the little mistakes that cost us the most. I also really enjoyed writing the essay since I plan to work in that field.
With time comes improvement. Looking back I realized my Writing is nowhere as advanced as it is today. From my vocabulary to my sentence structure has completely changed into a higher value overtime. I think the biggest and most beneficial improvement would have to be a my time managemen. Last semester my on demand essays would range from 1 to 2 pages. Now my essays run from 3 to 4 pages. This is a big difference because it shows that I develop my thesis, my writing styles, and my thoughts much more faster and then the past. I understand that this is going to help me with  AP test and that even though other aspects in my writing should be improved I'm happy to say that this has. Another improvement in my writing would be the analyzing rhetorical strategies in the prompt. I'm able to find more strategies and refresh them into my essay. Fallacies have especially been one of my favorite devices. My thesis  can be read more clearly in my argument which has become much stronger now and makes the essays evidence concrete.
I think that my portfolio defines a lot about me in many ways. It contains essays showing my opinion and student analysis. It shows my improvement and overall advancement. The organization of my portfolio even reflects my ability to keep track of things throughout then year. The newspaper analysis, on demand essays, and notes on lectures symbolize my value and potential as a student.

Found Poem

My amazing found poem.....
The rock weighed heavy in my hand
Everyone was throwing them
The men in black were enraged

I was still holding the rock
A cloud exploded
My eyes burned, they stung with pain

The men in black flooded over us
The beatings began
He grabbed me, I tried to run

I'm still holding my rock
The man in black chased me
I threw my rock


Logical Fallacies are an important factor when it comes to analyzing persuasive writing. Certain Fallacies pertain to give readers specific emotion and contrast towards the authors main moral. Here's a site with some Fallacies.
https://yourlogicalfallacyis.com/