And criticizing hunger between both sides while critics enjoy the
current state of society conservationist crave change and better laws in
favor of the environment. Wilson classically expresses the utter hatred
between the two extremist and their mental stubbornness of compromise.
Through the different point of views Wilson uses certain writing styles
to capture and inform the reader of the problem at hand.
"The people first critic stereotypes the environmentalist" is started
off by titling conservationist as "enviros" or "environmental wackos".
Wilson then uses wackos to refer to the environmentalist. This gives a
negative, almost insulting tone, against that environs starting off the
passage sharply. The readers develop a unintentional anti-hysteria
towards the environmentalist. Wilson uses diction throughout his writing
creating constant negative tones against the environmental wackos in
attempts of creating a judgment in favor but the critics to the reader.
In "The environmentalist stereotypes the people first critics" The
environmentalist attempt the same strategy of the critics. To start the
passage sharply by calling the critics hypocrites that are not apeasable
people. Environmentalist show the contradictions of the critics and
their greedy ways. Wilson uses environmentalists good actions in favor
of winning the readers liking. He also recovers the critics history of
corruption and social ties with big businesses.
On both sides exaggerations are taken way out of proportion to create
either hypocritical or mentally unstable view of the opponent. In favor
of the critics Wilson uses "real world possibilities" to explain why he
reference to environmentalist as wackos. "some Bennington College
student with a summer job will find an endangered red spider on your
property and before you know what happened that endangered species act
will be used to shut you down." Wilson shows the inconveniences of the
environmentalist goals and it's disfavor of society. By writing that the
person to find the spider is a student from Bennington university gives
reality to this hyperbole making it more believable.
Tuesday, May 26, 2015
favorote peice of work in portfolio
My favorite piece of work in my profile you will have to be my nuclear
power I chose this essay really hard on it and put a lot of effort into
writing it. I planned to work hard enough for a rewarding grade however,
despite my goal for success I was not able to provide the grade I
needed because of I failed to write the sources correctly. This essay
had the potential to score highly but because if a small mistake it
didn't. This reflects a bigger lesson to me, in life it's the little
mistakes that cost us the most. I also really enjoyed writing the essay
since I plan to work in that field.
With time comes improvement. Looking back I realized my Writing is nowhere as advanced as it is today. From my vocabulary to my sentence structure has completely changed into a higher value overtime. I think the biggest and most beneficial improvement would have to be a my time managemen. Last semester my on demand essays would range from 1 to 2 pages. Now my essays run from 3 to 4 pages. This is a big difference because it shows that I develop my thesis, my writing styles, and my thoughts much more faster and then the past. I understand that this is going to help me with AP test and that even though other aspects in my writing should be improved I'm happy to say that this has. Another improvement in my writing would be the analyzing rhetorical strategies in the prompt. I'm able to find more strategies and refresh them into my essay. Fallacies have especially been one of my favorite devices. My thesis can be read more clearly in my argument which has become much stronger now and makes the essays evidence concrete.
I think that my portfolio defines a lot about me in many ways. It contains essays showing my opinion and student analysis. It shows my improvement and overall advancement. The organization of my portfolio even reflects my ability to keep track of things throughout then year. The newspaper analysis, on demand essays, and notes on lectures symbolize my value and potential as a student.
With time comes improvement. Looking back I realized my Writing is nowhere as advanced as it is today. From my vocabulary to my sentence structure has completely changed into a higher value overtime. I think the biggest and most beneficial improvement would have to be a my time managemen. Last semester my on demand essays would range from 1 to 2 pages. Now my essays run from 3 to 4 pages. This is a big difference because it shows that I develop my thesis, my writing styles, and my thoughts much more faster and then the past. I understand that this is going to help me with AP test and that even though other aspects in my writing should be improved I'm happy to say that this has. Another improvement in my writing would be the analyzing rhetorical strategies in the prompt. I'm able to find more strategies and refresh them into my essay. Fallacies have especially been one of my favorite devices. My thesis can be read more clearly in my argument which has become much stronger now and makes the essays evidence concrete.
I think that my portfolio defines a lot about me in many ways. It contains essays showing my opinion and student analysis. It shows my improvement and overall advancement. The organization of my portfolio even reflects my ability to keep track of things throughout then year. The newspaper analysis, on demand essays, and notes on lectures symbolize my value and potential as a student.
Found Poem
My amazing found poem.....
The rock weighed heavy in my hand
Everyone was throwing them
The men in black were enraged
I was still holding the rock
A cloud exploded
My eyes burned, they stung with pain
The men in black flooded over us
The beatings began
He grabbed me, I tried to run
I'm still holding my rock
The man in black chased me
I threw my rock
The rock weighed heavy in my hand
Everyone was throwing them
The men in black were enraged
I was still holding the rock
A cloud exploded
My eyes burned, they stung with pain
The men in black flooded over us
The beatings began
He grabbed me, I tried to run
I'm still holding my rock
The man in black chased me
I threw my rock
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