My favorite piece of work in my profile you will have to be my nuclear
power I chose this essay really hard on it and put a lot of effort into
writing it. I planned to work hard enough for a rewarding grade however,
despite my goal for success I was not able to provide the grade I
needed because of I failed to write the sources correctly. This essay
had the potential to score highly but because if a small mistake it
didn't. This reflects a bigger lesson to me, in life it's the little
mistakes that cost us the most. I also really enjoyed writing the essay
since I plan to work in that field.
With time comes improvement. Looking back I realized my Writing is
nowhere as advanced as it is today. From my vocabulary to my sentence
structure has completely changed into a higher value overtime. I think
the biggest and most beneficial improvement would have to be a my time
managemen. Last semester my on demand essays would range from 1 to 2
pages. Now my essays run from 3 to 4 pages. This is a big difference
because it shows that I develop my thesis, my writing styles, and my
thoughts much more faster and then the past. I understand that this is
going to help me with AP test and that even though other aspects in my
writing should be improved I'm happy to say that this has. Another
improvement in my writing would be the analyzing rhetorical strategies
in the prompt. I'm able to find more strategies and refresh them into my
essay. Fallacies have especially been one of my favorite devices. My
thesis can be read more clearly in my argument which has become much
stronger now and makes the essays evidence concrete.
I think that my portfolio defines a lot about me in many ways. It
contains essays showing my opinion and student analysis. It shows my
improvement and overall advancement. The organization of my portfolio
even reflects my ability to keep track of things throughout then year.
The newspaper analysis, on demand essays, and notes on lectures
symbolize my value and potential as a student.
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